We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should be more suspicious of their benefits?
Computers turned the world into a small meeting and communication place, it helps in many sectors like, education, government and medical. Scientist believe in themselves that this technology will build a developed future and people can rely on since it's a good thing that will change their lives.
Many things can be done for a sophisticated future, that can help people. First, in space, astronauts can build their own equipment that make it easy to them to discover new planets and places that can’t be reach easily, and check if there are resources such as water or oxygen, and if human can live there. Computers can help people to increase their memory storage, by planting microelectronic chips in their brains, where they can store more info and assist in memorizing. For example, China Aerospace Association, are working on developing space machine that can walk on moon that absorb damages, to discover the second part of it.
On the other hand, society these days believe and rely on computers, since it's turning their work simple and making more profit. First, man can depend on this advanced technology, it helped several governments in cyber crimes, discovered drug and weapon dealers that are ruining societies. Second, computers opened the opportunity for big number of people to find new places where they believed there aren't exist. Addition to that, humans are closer to each other now, due to social media and internet, where they can connect easily. For example, Aliexpress website that collapse millions of Chinese shops in it, where it facilitates people life to shop online and trade faster, this encourages and help the economy of their country.
As a conclusion, computer is needed in our daily life and future, we can control it and don't let technology replace us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Scientist) must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...tion, government and medical. Scientist believe in themselves that this technology will...
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Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ped future and people can rely on since its a good thing that will change their liv...
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Line 9, column 402, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...nd new places where they believed there arent exist. Addition to that, humans are clo...
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Line 13, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... life and future, we can control it and dont let technology replace us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10774410774 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57454032548 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619528619529 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6785331048 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.416666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133565614003 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525032352482 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369779936129 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820842335916 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026674279034 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.