We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Certain individuals opine that parent give a lot of free time to their children, instead they should focus more on doing homework. In my opinion, I do believe that young generation should be given opportunity to spend their time in doing extra-curricular activities apart from school work.
The youth of the society should be motivated to do educational activities along with the school studies as it will not only aid in the cognitive development but will also contribute in the overall personality development of the child. They will be able to perform more effectively and efficiently in their academies. Moreover, it will assist them in learning the skills and expertise as well as will enhance their knowledge and understanding thus preparing them for the future endeavours and to build a successful professional life. To elucidate, children given the opportunity to play mind games such as sudoku, chess or allowing them to improve their writing skills will improve their thinking, creativity and concentration level.
Moreover, giving the youth the opportunity to play outside with their friends will help them to develop better social and communication skills. It will also help them to build better leadership qualities. Furthermore, by doing more of the physical activities such as cycling, football, basketball will help to improve their physical strength and thus will avoid many health issues such as obesity, diabetes and weak eyesight. To exemplify, according to recent study more that 50 percent of young generation are fat and have poor health as thy are not encouraged to do any sports and any other activities.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that children should be encourage be given spare time to do more of educational and sports activities apart from academic study as it will help in forming the persona and identity of a child.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...ehemently agree that children should be encourage be given spare time to do more of educa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91146393112 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513333333333 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.207849221 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.454545455 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127708820531 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608094648839 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465205505186 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904786230141 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279750523148 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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