Television plays a pivotal role in providing information through media as well as acts as a source of entertainment to the viewers. Undoubtedly, it positively affects the life of an individual imparting general knowledge and information from all over the world. But, perils of broadcasting violent stuffs cannot be ignored. This essay will discuss the contributing factors and the negative consequences on the community.
As we know, most of the TV channels broadcast movies and news captivating the individual's attention. To put differently, nowadays media channels display news regarding murders, kidnapping and other facts related to violence. They want to get the highest Television Rating Point in order to top the position amongst other channels. Therefore, such channels display violent and disastrous news. Infact people also get attracted towards such TV shows. Moreover, people also demand shows that add up spices which they find more interesting. For instance, there are more fake news channels that shows vulgarity, unexpected behaviours of people ruining the discipline. Consequently, these activities negatively effects people mindset.
The first and foremost consequence associated with this is the human tendency to grasp negative things more as compared to the positive thoughts. As a matter of fact, majority of people watch TV shows that are appealing to their eyes and shows displaying crimes, robbery and people commiting suicide. They find these TV shows interesting and some imitate such behaviour in their real life leading to adverse ramifications. Children are more vulnerable to copy and follow violent and brutal actions. They are unware of the negative outcomes associated with these. As a result, performs crime and robbery which in turn leads to juvenile delinquency. For example, most crimes performed by adults and children have been greately influenced by brutal TV shows.
In brief, TV shows have good as well as bad impact. Despite of brutal TV shows, it is individual's responsibility to adapt and imbibe good behaviour and watch them just as an entertainment source.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in brief, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48159509202 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93409517985 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8327545625 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0952380952 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5238095238 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121855666706 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349897500756 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268954302847 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692042178907 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225483934283 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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