Decision making plays a crucial rule in different stages of life as if chosen wisely can be beneficial or detrimental. As per the stated notion, it has been a matter of heated debate whether parents should interfere while making decisions of their child or they need to be independent. I denounce with the statement of taking decisions independently. This essay will discuss both the views before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
Considering the view point of making decisions at own, a child becomes self dependent and more confident if he is allowed to make his own choices without being advised by others. In other words, parents who do not interfere in their children lives after 15 are more likely to make them mature at early stages of their life and they become more experienced since they are able to know what is good and bad for them. For instance, if they make wrong choice in deciding something and the outcome would be negative, they would be able to experience hardships and failures to overcome these. Thus they become more responsible and will get to know their weak points. They will perform better in future by working on their weaknesses. However, parents have more experience than their children since they are the one to raise them and they know their strength and weaknesses better than a child knows him. Therefore, i denounce with the perspective of a child making choice at his own.
In contrast, some believe that parents need to interfere in decision making of their youngsters. To put differently, since the beginning of their pupil life, they are being responsible in deciding matters related to admitting them in a school to choosing best thing according to what best suits them whatever be it from providing nutritious meals to clothing. Majority of decisions are taken by parents when a child is immature. Moreover, when they remain strict with their children in choice making, they are less likely to commit wrong things and become a better person. At last, if a child
is permitted to do something at his own without taking recourse of parents, it can lead to negative repercussions sometimes because of lack of knowledge and experience. To illustrate, a recent survey by The Times reported more than 70 percent children faced negative results thereby leading a depressed life and some commited crimes as they were living life alone and independently without being interrupted by parents and made wrong decisions. Hence, it clearly proves my point of view why this argument has gained support.
To conclude, children should always take the help of their guardians in making a decision worthwhile owing to the experienced they have gained so that they can help them in any case.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rdships and failures to overcome these. Thus they become more responsible and will g...
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...by working on their weaknesses. However, parents have more experience than their ...
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...trast, some believe that parents need to interfere in decision making of their yo...
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...elated to admitting them in a school to choosing best thing according to what best suits them...
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...ome a better person. At last, if a child is permitted to do something at his own ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in contrast, in any case, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2268.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 457.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96280087527 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65385111681 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501094091904 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8348939334 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.368421053 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0526315789 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26867206743 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871820617562 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512600782043 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15854450992 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243990409803 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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