Children over 15 years should be allowed to take their own decision without any interference from Their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
Gone are the days when children have no right to live their life independently without their parents decision. In this world of modernization, it is argued that children more than 15 will be allowed to live their life freely with their own decision. Here, i would like to accord with given statement.
There are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost, young generation is capable enough to live life in their own ways as it helps them to become goal oriented. To explain, independent decision making at this help a child not only to achieve goals but also boost their self confidence in every aspects of life. Thus, decision make by their own self both increase their confidence and make them responsible. In addition, self decision make children easy to fix in new environment. Therefore, they are able to make friends easily and are co-operative in nature as well and they feel socially stronger.
Further emphasizing on my point of view. Professionally, children above 15 years are who are given an opportunity to make their own decision are more self reliant and self confident. For instance, in this jet age of 21st century they can explore their skills more as well as can enjoy managerial posts. Hence, Independence of making decision lead them challenging and creative youth. On the contrary, others have conflicting views.
Numerous points to explain its thorny side. Initially, children above 15 are not so mature and not so able to take their own decision . However, in this premature age they may distract towards negative sides without their parents guidance. As a result, parents guidance work as a lamp to brighten and secure their future bright.
To recapitulate, allowing children to make their own decision helps them to boost their confidence and will teach them to take responsibilities by themselves but this does not mean they should neglect their parents. In the end, a child is happy if he takes right decision at right time.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238482384824 0.247107548796 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.162601626016 0.15552993741 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0867208672087 0.0946569551029 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0677506775068 0.0501201869031 135% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0921409214092 0.0437536398559 211% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0975609756098 0.122223957237 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0271002710027 0.0403219363162 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69604918362 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0487804878049 0.0326786765898 149% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0433604336043 0.0861751148067 50% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189701897019 0.0214082191602 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00542005420054 0.0119246538136 45% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2001.0 1933.38276553 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 316.052104208 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99101796407 6.10592293882 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20519365927 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308383233533 0.37474360046 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24251497006 0.284197041944 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182634730539 0.203843217982 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101796407186 0.137313986986 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69604918362 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541916167665 0.560935902166 97% => OK
Word variations: 57.9777336435 60.7401812628 95% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0911823647 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7 20.7725350517 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8222780805 49.5273876611 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.05 93.4120437189 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 15.2821509519 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.594174754866 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01102204409 239% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.951497006 49.1922392462 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.12605042017 1.69127372897 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315945090476 0.332604825255 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0672487770264 0.102734651613 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0649950005222 0.0668474354756 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.466786225537 0.534917948617 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148887822711 0.148666948902 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107177822594 0.13441755203 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909108258614 0.0742828286743 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311362608125 0.324241079732 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0564667662803 0.0640056729886 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224765252722 0.22793763319 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683546339662 0.0582452615562 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41883767535 29% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.88977955912 170% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.60220440882 154% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.00200400802 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 10.493987976 133% => OK
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Rates: 70.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.5 Out of 9