What do you think are the strengths and weakness of the education system in your own country Use your own experience to support your idea.
As per many researchers there is a heavy brain-drain in India resulting from awesome analytical skills Indians carry from Indian education system. This proves that the education system adopted in India is rigorous and is of course far fetching in helping to world bloom in IT industry.
On the other hand we also have some sets of society strongly proclaiming that Indian method of education does not probe students to think. It only allows them to excel in what is already invented. Due to heavy competition to get seats in top-notch universities, neither students nor teachers show any interest in research study. The teachers also encourage students to go for top grades and then to find jobs in top companies. But, none of them actually motivate students to become independent or take them towards becoming self-sustained or entrepreneurship and leadership qualities.
From the details above, it is pretty evident that although many students from my country, India are finding great jobs in multi national companies and are making their place in heavy competition, they do not have capability to be self-made.
I am of the opinion that Indian's method education should be diverted from being results driven to being content driven.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As per many researchers there is a heavy b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, so, then, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21890547264 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82898714002 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4768626892 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.555555556 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0579557768299 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254626468485 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214328067131 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0338430637639 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189588712125 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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