When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than Shopping Centre’s (Agree/Disagree)
Now a days, it has become common that cities and towns are occupied with a greater number of office buildings and shopping malls than parks and sports ground.
I understand that due to high population and difficulty in land availability people are keen in constructing buildings and lending it for rent as money plays a vital role in everyone's life.
However, I strongly stick on to the statement that public parks and sports facilities should be given more weightage when new towns are planned are introduced as health comes before wealth.
There are many reasons why we must promote the creation of parks and other physical facilities such as sports clubs, gym and playgrounds.
It enables the children to get exposed to the outer world and cultivate interests towards indoor as well as outdoor sport. For example, kids today are much interested in mobile phones and video games which is making them obese as the physical activity involved is less. They are affected with lifestyle disease such as obesity and problem with neuro functions.
Those people who can't afford going to gym can do exercise as all the parks have equipment’s which helps people to keep their body fit. Also, park is place where we get a chance to meet people from different culture and helps us to build a good relationship.Additionally, parks help with tackling air pollution and enables people in breathing fresh air.
On the other hand, constructing shopping malls has many benefits. More shopping malls makes people's life easy as all the provisions or goods required for daily needs as well as for luxury is available within the locality. For instance, unlike early period people need no travel to other cities to buy things.
To put it in a nutshell, I would like to conclude stating that shopping malls might make people’s life easy in terms of wealth.
But Parks and Sports Centre’s would change people’s lifestyle and provide them good health and harmony.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08868501529 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82393342135 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60244648318 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9262652055 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245694365734 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791880607259 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794945662951 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110880241571 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821721233874 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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