When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer?
Support your answer with specific details.
You should write at least 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Customs and traditions is a thread that binds the community together. It provides a sense of identity to people. It Is highly debated issue whether moving a different country, people should follow the traditions of the other country or their own values. In this essay we will discuss both the views, however in my opinion, I do believe that people when visiting different countries should pay respect to their values and traditions.
Certain individuals have this notion that when moving to a new nation should stick to their own traditions and customs as they are their identity. People who believe in religious values and customs should not change their behaviour when visiting other place as this will shake their own faith and personality. To elucidate, people who follow certain religion which prohibit them from eating cow meat, when they visit to the place where cow meat is include in every dish, those people should not change their religious belief accordingly and start eating cow meat.
However, I strongly agree that humans when visiting a new place should follow their beliefs and customs. There is a popular verbalisation to support the above statement that is In Rome do as the Romans do, in other words, when going to a new place follow their traditions. People should respect their customs and values and should not in any way harm their sentiments. Moreover, It helps people to have in-depth knowledge about their beliefs and will widen their understanding. By following their customs, they will have an emotional connect with the people of different country and thus will bridge the cultural and social gap thus, bringing all the nations together. To exemplify, In America is is considered rude and ill-mannered to ask someone their salary, so foreigners when visiting their country should not ask such questions as it will hurt their feelings.
To conclude, we have discussed both the views of following the customs of other nations and to follow one’s own traditions in different country. In my opinion, I vehemently agree that people when going to different place to highly regard and appreciate their values and should follow them as this will enable ion mutual understanding and building strong relations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'included'.
Suggestion: included
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...ons together. To exemplify, In America is is considered rude and ill-mannered to ask...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11716621253 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57655615336 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457765667575 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0646488734 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.2 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4666666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267686008353 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111896276458 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055868258232 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18572500519 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107655380518 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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