Why does society pays less attention to women’s sports as compared to men’s sports?
In this advanced society, it becomes a debatable issue that women are lacking behind in sports as compared to men. it does mean that society or nation is paying less attention but there are some related factors that are also responsible for this indifference.
To begin with, the women are equal participant of games but they are suffering from major challenges only after marriage as they are supposed to have some other responsibilities that demand attention.I agreed that somehow society is responsible for neglecting girls roles in sports as the senior residents exceed their expectations from their daughter in-laws and seek their time and presence to accomplish all household activities. moreover, it is also seen that some of the famous sportswomen had resigned from their profession due to family involvement. Hence, it is pretty clear how society influence the growth of women in sports world.
moving further, men can freely move here and there to attend training and coaching that sometimes becomes obstacle for the girls. it is often seen in some families where they give freedom to their daughters to choose their career but still they are unable to permit them to commute alone due to the societal stigma as a result of which an upcoming sport personality becomes helpless to fulfill her dream. moreover, due to rapid crime people feel unsecure to send their girls especially for sports and they ignore their habits and passion. Doing work at home in the specified mentioned time of practice is also one of the major problem from which athlete has to suffer.
In conclusion, having equal opportunity is not enough until this is being utilized by both sexes in equal proportion. I believe that parents and society should encourage the sports women to seek growth and success in spite of ignoring them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, as to, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05980066445 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59688057097 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.4309370474 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.454545455 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204349144564 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865771546438 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802397197445 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146343322929 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945212142572 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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