There has been a dramatic growth in the number of people studying at universities in the last few decades. While some people see this as a positive trend which raises the general level of education within the community, others fear that it is lowering the quality of education.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of the increase in student numbers at university?
This is absolutely that from last couple of years there is a steady increase in the number of university scholars. Moreover, studying in the universities is having both positive as well negative consequences that i am going to discuss in my upcoming writing.
To begin with, there is an observable change in the study that is seen in the modern world as a result of which students are much interested to choose their career on the basis of their professional competency skills.However, national educational institutions are the prestigious place to study but most often students are even migrating to international educational system too that is an act of appreciation . I believe that upgradation of person is essential for upbringing of the community. An another reason of raised admissions in higher studies is the availability of wide range of subjects that encourages the learners to enrol in masters and doctorate degrees.
In continuation to pros, cons can not be ignored. achieving advanced practice in study is sometimes associated with some flaws like stigma in students belonging to middle class families to pay tuition fees. Otherwise, a steady increase in university count is one of the big challenge for the government to raise enough funds for staff and resource maintenance. Lack of employment due to demand of high competent skills is also one of the major problem due to which some students think that they had wasted their money and time in studies.
In conclusion, it seems to me education is the basic pillar of individual personality that sometimes influence negatively to others. due to craving of professionalism and personalism sometimes quality of life is influenced. I agree that everyone must avail the benefits to grow but enrollment should be limited so that the trained professional could live free to be affected by others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15231788079 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09740501188 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.1524811018 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133951976154 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426725776226 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035190727938 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778860703723 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454996568375 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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