Why people buy new technology, phone or laptop. What is the advantages and disadvantages of this.
Technology is the latest trend in society, this gigantic wave has swiped away all age group whether rich or poor. Although there are numerous benefits of technology like automated and effortless work, the drawbacks cannot be ignored and should be taken into account.
To begin with the plethora of advantages, firstly, owning latest technology increases ones’ social status. Who does not want to be the lime light of social gathering? Teenagers are targeted by commercials and young minds get captivated by mesmerizing advertisements. Secondly, tech savvy people crave for latest market entry devices to abreast themselves. Mobile phones, for instance, has replaced multiple items from our life-like calendar, calculator, camera, music system and the list goes on. Having an up-to-date smart phone can reduce life tension to many extends right from getting up with the alarm clock to switching on water heater connected via mobile application and booking cab to reach destination on time.
On the other hand, technology keeps changing and leads to wastage of money. Many people would not think twice before spending on new laptop or phone even though their existing one are in excellent condition. Another vital negative point is people get addicted to it, which in return deteriorate their health and mental ability. As an illustration, in previous decade prior to mobiles, people used to calculate orally in contrast to now when even for small calculation mobile calculators are used. Children would have played outdoor games if mobile had not introduced to them.
To recapitulate, no doubt technology has entered in almost all phases of life, as small as making coffee in machine to performing crucial operations on critical patients, however, It also leads to downside of getting socially cut and health issues due to lack of outdoor activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'owning the latest'.
Suggestion: owning the latest
...th the plethora of advantages, firstly, owning latest technology increases ones' social ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in contrast, no doubt, in contrast to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34693877551 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7240799882 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700680272109 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5691637193 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0846418370892 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257337798606 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448478745965 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0417817137733 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041239267592 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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