Why some people buy new phones, desktop and latest technology
what is good or bad about it
Technology has become integral part of everyone’s life. There is no doubt that in the correct circumstances the latest gadgets are the valuable tools. However, if used excessively, it becomes dangerous weapon and detrimental to both individual and society.
Advance cutting-edge technology has ease out our life tremendously. First of all, the latest available phones and desktops are becoming compact devices with number of features like camera, calculator, microphone, calendar what not.so we do not need to buy them individually. Secondly, at this age of highest competition among colleagues, dynamic workforce, tight deadlines, these devices are helping to do work in a shorter period with different features for better analysis. Thirdly, complex and lengthy calculation are done in a couple of minutes with accuracy and precision, which removes human error. Finally, Computer and mobile phones are much cheaper and widely available now a day to make, with widely available range of prices.
At the same time, however, excessive and inappropriate use of same products are resulting in negative effects on the community. On the one hand, youngster sometimes cannot discriminate between good and bad and can incline to use these devices with wrong intentions. For example, inappropriate content like watching pornography, support of terrorism, excessive use of laptops for leisure activities like watching movies, listening songs and making friends on the internet. Additionally, there are people, who buy latest devices to show off in society, which can damage self-esteem and prevail inferiority complex among others. Finally, technology has proving to be major factor in success of any enterprise, conglomerates or individual business thus resulting in increasing gap between successful and failed one.
Having thought about it, I think using these in moderation can be useful, but it certainly has a darker side. Therefore, we should buy up to date devices and use them at their utmost to help the society and help us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the highest'.
Suggestion: of the highest
...hem individually. Secondly, at this age of highest competition among colleagues, dynamic w...
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Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buy the latest'.
Suggestion: buy the latest
...et. Additionally, there are people, who buy latest devices to show off in society, which c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, for example, i think, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52715654952 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00482587756 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645367412141 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8386542366 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083151848419 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248970639152 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331819176367 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0459619942674 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111790471591 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.