Why some people buy new phones, desktop and latest technology
what is good or bad about it
Technology has become integral part of everyone’s life. There is no doubt that in the correct circumstances the latest gadgets are the valuable tools. However, if used excessively, it becomes dangerous weapon and detrimental to both individual and society.
Advance cutting-edge technology provides several advantages. Firstly, latest available phones and desktops have a number of features, which were previously available individually. These are becoming compact devices with solution of almost everything from a single product. Secondly, these have helped in the solution of any problem at any time. At this age of higher competition at work place and meeting deadlines in a shorter period of time, any information can be found on the internet which can be used only on phones and personal computers. Thirdly, those who use a computer can calculate complex transactions in a couple of minutes with accuracy, which removes human error. Finally, Computer and mobile phones are much cheaper and widely available now a day.
At the same time, however, it is necessary to acknowledge the potential weakness too. On the one hand, youngster sometimes cannot discriminate good from bad and can incline to use these devices with wrong intentions. For example, watching pornography, excessive use of laptops for leisure activities like watching, movies, songs and the life of celebrities, support of terrorism and inappropriate contents. Additionally, there are those who buy latest devices to show off in society, which can damage self-esteem of others, who cannot afford and be target of inferiority complex. Finally, as technology has become one of the major reasons of winning nowadays, those who possess would have a major advantage over other and be more successful.
Having thought about it, I think using these in moderation can be useful, but it certainly has a darker side. Therefore, we should buy up to date devices and use them at their utmost to help the society and help us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...lace and meeting deadlines in a shorter period of time, any information can be found on the in...
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Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buy the latest'.
Suggestion: buy the latest
...ents. Additionally, there are those who buy latest devices to show off in society, which c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, i think, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33227848101 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94674973504 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613924050633 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7746467043 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1176470588 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0682164016374 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0207120679159 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298010318243 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420778638436 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152730297334 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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