Working hours today are too long and people are not spending as much time as they should with their families or on leisure activities.
What is your opinion on this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The question of the long occupational day has been widely discussed in recent years. Nowadays we can see a very dismal tendency: an immense amount of people take on extra work to earn extra money to feed their families. Therefore, it makes them unable to spend time with their loved ones or carry out recreational activities. From my point of view, such statement is completely correct and I would like to explain why.
One of the main arguments against long working day is that long hours of work have a negative impact on the mental and physical health of workers such as an increase of stress, an accretion of cardiovascular diseases and the deterioration of family relationships among many other problems.
Secondly, many nations like Sweden and the Netherlands have experimented in the last decade with shortening the work-week which has yielded positive results on the productivity front. Moreover, a lot of people automatically think that reducing the work-hours to 30 hours per week will crash productivity, but there’s evidence that this is far from true.
All in all, despite the increasing working hours experienced by many people nowadays, which will cause less togetherness with families as well as the lack of leisure activities, is necessary to find a balance between work life and personal life. Therefore, people must also have some time for themselves to participate in recreational activities or spend time with their families.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1906779661 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96332497147 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652542372881 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1379030679 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.111111111 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215623373674 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820338799577 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045131288534 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123786339401 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392776715995 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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