Write about the following topic:
Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It's always debatable whether human being is naturally a carnivorous animal or hermivorous. History tells us that homosapians transformed from chimpanzees who were originally vegetarian and when human managed to grow into food chain, we transformed to a carnivorous species. However, It's being debated for long whether having meat is good for our heath or not. In this essay, I will share my view on this topic.
Science has proven that eating vegetables and fruits is good for digestive system whereas meat strains our digestive system and over a long period of time it can damage lever and intestines. Meat also is a prominent source of bad cholesterol which eventually is a major reason for heart stroke. Study shows that our body is self reliant to generate amount of cholesterol required by body to function properly. Hence, we don't need any additional cholesterol from food. Experts says that meat is great source of protein and to maintain a balanced growth of body protien is essential. However, there are many alternative source of proteins. For example Lumes, soybean, Tofu etc.
Our population in 21st centuray has increased three fold in last hundred year and 60% of world population staple food is meat and seafood. To meet this demand, corporates do animal farming in factory model. In these farms animals are grown for a sole purpose of selling meat. Condition of animals in such farms is extremely bad. For instance, in the farms hundred of chickens are kept into a very small cage and given chemically induced food to increase their weight. If as a human being, we will reduce eating meat, it will stop such atrocity. This industrialization of meat, also led to new diseases like bird flu and covid-19 which eventually kills million of human being.
Finally, I feel that food is just a source of energy for human being and animal is just one source. We should always look forward to lean on other sources of energy and keep animals meat as last resort. It's extremely important that we live with nature in harmony and share our humanity across all species.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ns our digestive system and over a long period of time it can damage lever and intestines. Mea...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...by body to function properly. Hence, we dont need any additional cholesterol from fo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sources'?
Suggestion: sources
...al. However, there are many alternative source of proteins. For example Lumes, soybean...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...tremely bad. For instance, in the farms hundred of chickens are kept into a very small ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 653, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...flu and covid-19 which eventually kills million of human being. Finally, I feel that ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, however, if, look, so, whereas, for example, for instance, i feel, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91193181818 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61102729211 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585227272727 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5481712906 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145943890009 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452693679534 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457869468882 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864504855198 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032765552097 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ns our digestive system and over a long period of time it can damage lever and intestines. Mea...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...by body to function properly. Hence, we dont need any additional cholesterol from fo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sources'?
Suggestion: sources
...al. However, there are many alternative source of proteins. For example Lumes, soybean...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...tremely bad. For instance, in the farms hundred of chickens are kept into a very small ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 653, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...flu and covid-19 which eventually kills million of human being. Finally, I feel that ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, however, if, look, so, whereas, for example, for instance, i feel, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91193181818 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61102729211 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585227272727 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5481712906 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145943890009 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452693679534 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457869468882 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864504855198 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032765552097 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.