Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details.
- why do you want to collect money for the charity organization?
- Ask your friend to help
- explain in detail how your friend can help.
Dear Samira,
As you know that I am involved in philanthropic work and keep on working on projects which helps people to come out of illness. This time I have taken the voluntary responsibility to collect funds for cancer patients. I am writing this letter to seek your help to collect money for cancer patients in United Kingdom.
Currently I am working for charity organization named ‘Prohuman’ which have offices in 19 countries especially in developing and under developing nations. Since I am studying in U.K, I choose the United Kingdom because and believe that my study would not be affected much.
Last week, I have started this campaign in London and provided training to members to members based out in London and near areas. We have also created computer based training which helps other members to understand whole program and how individual can help the patients in United kingdom. Though you are busy in study at university, I expect that you spread this campaign by email or word of mouth in your university.
Let me know if any queries. I am looking forward to getting help from you on this program.
With Regards,
Jama
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Samira, As you know that I am involved in philan...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eveloping and under developing nations. Since I am studying in U.K, I choose the Unit...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: K
...oping nations. Since I am studying in U.K, I choose the United Kingdom because an...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to members'.
Suggestion: to members
...ampaign in London and provided training to members to members based out in London and near areas. We ...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... am looking forward to getting help from you on this program. With Regards, Jam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82542230062 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2559515219 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2727272727 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186022730528 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693365116233 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876855202404 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108697004502 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807646747832 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.