Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individuals to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Essay topics: Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individuals to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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One of the primary responsibilities of the government is to maintain law & order, control crime and protect the citizens. But

some people believe that more than the government, people should take the ownership and measures for their protection.
People who emphasis that individuals should be made accountable for their security have some points. First and foremost, government is involved in so many programs and may not focus on every facts required to protect the each citizen. Consequently, there might be loopholes in controlling the crime. For example, police stations keeps the records of the registered criminals and set a watch on them, but there are numerous petty criminals in local area which go unnoticed. Another point is that in most of the countries, government resources are limited and in case of crisis, help may not be arrived on time and people may suffer badly because of delayed help.

However, numerous people look up to government for providing protection and control crimes. It is considered that government resources are well trained in handling crime situation effectively in different circumstances. Police in most of the country are equipped with tools required to control and prevent the crime. For instance, in case of unrest, police use light weapons to arrest the criminals and save the victim. Also, government has local intelligence service by which they get to know in advance about the perpetration of crimes. Therefore, a lot more planning can be done to prevent the crime.

In conclusion, people should be alert and take steps for their protection. However, it is the primary responsibility of government to protect the people and stop the crimes.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89809108887 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540441176471 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1970758984 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317159456247 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107619243212 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645274050621 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192709534466 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353986725589 0.056905535591 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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