You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the m

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You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to log complain about the non- receipt of cheque book which I requested around two weeks back.
I run a small enterprise and most of the financial transactions are done through cheques. In order to avoid crisis of cheque book, I regularly check the status and place request in advance. Generally, it takes a week to get it from the bank by the courier, though this time I did not receive anything. Although, I am not acquainted with online method, I sought the help of my accountant and placed the request online through Net banking. I was in the impression that online request expedite the delivery, however, it did not in my case. Now it has become critical for me to get the cheque book as I am not able to make payments to the suppliers and this is causing disruption in my business.
Firstly, I would like you to enquire about this incident and confirm back to me, how long it will take more to reach me. In addition, what actions will be taken so that such incidents should not be repeated in the future?

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
James

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52941176471 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50322744383 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8595726939 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209019143847 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704702860857 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607709640829 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130393098552 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304589149605 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.