You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organiser.
Write a letter to the Training Organiser
expressing your interest in the role
requesting more information about it
explaining what experience you have
Dear Mr.Joseph,
As you are aware, about the announcement that you decided regarding of having one of the participants in this training to be the social event’s organizer.
I am writing to inform you that I am interest in taking this role. Where I am a good organizer and I have great ideas to share with other trainees, this way I could give my experience and make the best of this training.
However, since we have around two weeks before going the training, I would like from your side to provide me with all the information related to it, such as location, number of guests, schedule, and training. Where I could brainstorm my ideas according to the details and organize the best social event, where all the participants could enjoy their time during this training and feel relaxed.
Addition to that, you can find my resume with the submitted application form, including all my experience in social marketing and events, that are organized by my own as a freelancer or for companies.
Thank you for your time and consideration, hope my email finds you well, waiting for your reply as soon as possible, in order to assist.
Sincerely Yours,
Elie
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Joseph
Dear Mr.Joseph, As you are aware, about the announc...
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Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
.... I am writing to inform you that I am interest in taking this role. Where I am a good ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, so, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71055344902 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0458499821 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179954811033 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785300639199 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685713497985 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108163369561 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750090925097 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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