Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my gratitude for the service you offered last week when I visited your restaurant along with my friends to celebrate my birthday. It was one of the most memorable birthday events in my life and I would love to recommend your restaurant to my acquaintances.
The atmosphere inside the restaurant was very soothing and relaxing, such as the decoration of sparkling lights and soft background music. We ordered a Chinese menu which are tasty and well presented. All of us thoroughly enjoy the food. In addition, we received prompt service and the waiters were quite friendly. I cannot forget that your staff offering a complimentary birthday cake. The whole birthday party is unforgettable.
However, I have a suggestion that you may think of introducing some discount cards or a special menu to draw customer attention. I hope that you would consider this suggestion.
Once again, I would like to thank you for making my birthday celebration special and worth enjoying.
Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13294797688 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93769031572 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676300578035 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0372530986 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340507953904 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950062839675 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689886620333 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163830645751 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717949110645 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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