Dear Amber,
Congratulation! I am so glad to hear that you are starting your own business after excellent work experience. My good wishes are always with you. Thank you for your invitation to the opening ceremony however I would like to seek your apology for I cannot attend the inauguration because I need to attend the smart robot competition this Friday.
When we were still students, you often told me that your dream was to own a store and often shared with me that the store would sell all kinds of things you like. I know very well that you put a lot of effort into the new store, now your dream has come true and I am really happy for you. As much as I wanted to share the joy with you, I have a very important competition at the open day which this competition will build a stronger reputation for my career.
This competition will take a week. I will come back to your shop and congratulate you and report the result of the competition.
I am looking forward to meet you soon and I wish you will have longest of customers.
Best wishes,
Chris Wong
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...he competition. I am looking forward to meet you soon and I wish you will have longe...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, really, so, still, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43939393939 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49337966398 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1945873772 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351869488694 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138385759167 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863498900873 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22202055537 0.12726935374 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075754053419 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.