You have lost your credit card Write a letter to the manager of your bank In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manager to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Essay topics:

You have lost your credit card. Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manager to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inform you about my credit card which I lost recently. Let me briefly explain the incident.

To elucidate the incident happened yesterday when I hired a taxi from the office. While paying cash to the driver I may have accidentally lost my credit card from my wallet as I was in a hurry to catch the last bus from the taxi stand and I realized that I had lost my credit card only when I reached home. Although I tried to call the taxi company to inquire if they had found out a missing card but unfortunately they had not recovered any such item. Eventually, with no options left, I had to call your customer care representative to block my card immediately as I was worried about someone misusing the card.

Lastly, I request you to cancel my old credit card immediately and issue a new card as I use it for my daily transaction and without this card, my life has become miserable.
Looking forward to your response and immediate help.
Yours sincerely
Saad

Votes
Average: 6.3 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inform you ...
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Line 4, column 596, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'misuses'.
Suggestion: misuses
...ediately as I was worried about someone misusing the card. Lastly, I request you to ...
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Line 6, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his card, my life has become miserable. Looking forward to your response and imm...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se and immediate help. Yours sincerely Saad
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, if, lastly, look, may, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51366120219 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62059320273 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617486338798 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2682971839 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7777777778 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319067938251 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119975956031 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888333755981 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190075317482 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790531393862 0.056905535591 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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