You should spend about 40 minutes on this task
Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Write at least 250 words
Media plays the society's most important role and is used for mass communication. People are always looking forward to receiving the latest information from different media sources such as television, radio, internet. Because celebrities are the prime members of the entertainment world. They are always targeted by reporters and paparazzi, providing more details about their lives. Whether they should argue about undue press interference in their lives or appreciate their involvement, will be discussed further in this essay.
To embark on, there is no denying fact that celebrities always try to grab the press reporter’s attention to be in limelight. The famous people deliberately engage in social activities, endorsements, advertisements to catch the attention of the audience as their career path will go down if they will forget about them. For example, generally when hero and heroines have to promote their movie, they always participate on live television shows and news channels like Kapil Sharma show.
On the contrary, prominent artists are human beings and they have the right to enjoy the comfort of their personal life. Always being surrounded by the paparazzi they always have to be extra cautious when going out of their home. Moreover, the media people always interfere in their personal life advertising about the food they eat, foreign places they visit, how they celebrate the festivals? And many more. As a result, they are not able to live a normal life just like the citizens of the nation. For example, sometimes the press reporters cook up false stories about the actors and actresses or poke in their way of living commenting about their clothing and cosmetics in order to increase the TRP of their channel.
To conclude, I agree that the people irrespective of their popularity they have the right to enjoy their life with friends and family and media should respect the boundaries and publish authentic information only after getting their permission.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es such as television, radio, internet. Because celebrities are the prime members of th...
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Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually put after the verb 'being'.
Suggestion: Being Always
...joy the comfort of their personal life. Always being surrounded by the paparazzi they always...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have the right to enjoy their life with friends and family and media should resp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, then, for example, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27987421384 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75198918675 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581761006289 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2372160507 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.933333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310158604624 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102739325574 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618180557192 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2009218893 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391764763484 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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