Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
it is human's instinct to become a renowned personality and can get maximum benefit out of it. Famous people have all luxuries of life, popularity and money, so it has been suggested by some that media has right to intervene in their private matters. If I had to make a choice, I would definitely disagree with this view-point as there must be restrictions on sharing someone's privacy and media should follow the regulations in order to keep peace in this respect.
Popular celebrities may become fashion icon, musicians, politicians, sportman and so on. All of them have been considered to be the public property, either they have been enjoying family time or attending a dinner party at home. they have been under observation by public, news reporters, fans and followers. For instance; news reporters have been found to focus on personal affairs of artists, even they misuse their physical features and make a hot news to present on their channel, in order to gain higher ratings and views. Thus creating a bad impression and scandalise public icon's rapot. although, they have earned enough money, provided with all luxuries of life and rewarded with high amount of cash but they have to struggle hard to make a good impression in competitive environment, in return. I would suggest it is the responsibilty of the government to apply restrictions on broadcasting news related to their private life. As everyone has a right to make their own choices in their lives, any breach in information must be reported, either it has been made by fans, electronic or social media. Viewers should not focus on their personal matters as it may lead to an indecent and humongus individuals rather than responsible citizens.
public icons unitentionally became notorious, dealt with heavy fine, accused of convictions, threatened by fraudist, suffer from anxiety, depression and subsequent psychiatric problems, unknowningly destrying their life due to fake news reported on social medis. For instance; Mark weins had been kept in prison after misbehaving one of his followers in a birthday celebration.
To conclude; although public icons endorsed with luxuries of life, rewards and property; however, media play an impactful role in their success. one of the responsibilities of the higher authorities is to implement regulations on news broadcasted through media and these platforms ought to be discourage any interruptions in celebrities private life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24427480916 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96668978973 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575063613232 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5933547625 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.8125 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5625 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254061632153 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796106349129 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570787368279 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140814982431 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761788225907 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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