You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Each countries has your own rules and laws, but sometimes it can be a problem when these countries allow children do what they want to do because they think that is right, do not understanding the situation and sometimes is disrespectful.
Some countries around the World treat children as an adult when they commit some crimes. For example in USA when the children kill someone, steal a public store or people who are walking on the streets and the police arrested him. In the most of cases the children will be judged by the judge as an adult person. If the crime is heavy the child can stay in the prison for the rest of his life.
Otherwise, in my country the people do not think in the same way and they believe that when a children commits crimes they need to go to a some place to try to recover himself and then try a new life even if he killed someone in the past. Perhaps, the children make mistakes because they are protected by laws as he cannot be arrested until he achieve 18 years old. Sometimes an adult use children to commit crime and try to be safe incriminating the child saying that who killed the person was the child who was involved in the assault.
In my opinion, I believe that all children should go to school but if he commit a crime he should go to the prison and learn their mistakes like an adult. I also believe that sometimes the real mistake is not only because of the children but was how their parents educated him and taught good manners to them.
In conclusion, It is important to everyone follow the rules and help each other to avoid this problems which many countries around the World are suffering. It will make everyone more comfortable and we could feel free to go everywhere any time and without fear.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
Each countries has your own rules and laws, ...
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Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
Each countries has your own rules and laws, but sometimes ...
^^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the cases') or simply say ''most cases''.
Suggestion: most of the cases; most cases
...ets and the police arrested him. In the most of cases the children will be judged by the judg...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...the same way and they believe that when a children commits crimes they need to go to a som...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'achieves'.
Suggestion: achieves
... laws as he cannot be arrested until he achieve 18 years old. Sometimes an adult use ch...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 539, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... child who was involved in the assault. In my opinion, I believe that all childr...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'commits'.
Suggestion: commits
... children should go to school but if he commit a crime he should go to the prison and ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... the rules and help each other to avoid this problems which many countries around th...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44582043344 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35625479563 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50773993808 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4589237483 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232153996811 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845887013985 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749329508801 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134841475636 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615037223559 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.