The fact that old British can stay at home with their families or loved ones with a professional nurse working on-site is rather desirable, especially, all the expenses are paid by the government. While it is not sustainable for a country in a long term run. In my opinion, all the expenses are obligated to both government and families. In this essay, I will explain my point of view through discussions on both sides.
Government certainly has responsibilities to look after her people no matter they are working or have retired, as all the retirees had paid for their own share of welfare system. Undoubtedly, I believe ever single individual has to pay their taxes accordingly during their entire working life. The government, by those means, has to take such responsibilities to provide healthcare for her people, such as arrangement of nurses, and other related services, especially for someone who has made significant contribution to the country. There was an old soldier who survived from World War II, yet lost his left leg and lived in Yorkshire alone. The British government and local administration are absolutely responsible to provide living care services without any charge. Whereas, partial covered healthcare criteria could possibly be applied to someone who live without any difficulties.
However, are there any obligations that the families or old people themselves should take on? Of course there are such. Just as in China, according to the Constitution, all the adutls are obligated to look after their own parents. The old generation receive retiring payment monthly from the government and are also supported by their own kids financially, daily living-wise.
In conclusion, neither the government nor the family should solely pay for healthcare expenses in my point of view. A comprehensive criteria of healthcare or medical expense are requested to develop for clarifying the specific ratio of the government and the family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 771, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...iving care services without any charge. Whereas, partial covered healthcare criteria co...
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Line 3, column 816, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...as, partial covered healthcare criteria could possibly be applied to someone who live without ...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'criterion'?
Suggestion: criterion
...es in my point of view. A comprehensive criteria of healthcare or medical expense are re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, look, so, whereas, while, as to, in conclusion, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26837060703 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03411786933 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594249201278 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0157757463 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196129455727 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577330083969 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323153417509 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113167405479 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164533126177 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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