You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries.
Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
As more and more countries are heading towards socio-economic development, no one can deny the cans of worms it brought along with. Issue topping the list is the overweight younger generation which has made thinkers around the world sit and take note of. The following essay would try to throw some light on its effects and causes.
To begin with, the portion size of served food in developed nations is way more than health experts suggest. For example, average food served in any restaurant, bakery shop , hotel , home etcetera in West is shockingly almost double the size of meal in any Asian household or outside. Hence, the results are aweful! The Scientific results shows much more obese population in West than in Asian countries, resulting in serious illness likes of heart attack, bursting arteries and many more life threatning disesases.
Moreover, Stastically proven, developed countries mean people getting busier with their lives more than ever often are left with barely anytime. Hence usually, it is seen that busy parents might have to give in to poor food choices resulting in serving loads of junk food to their offsprings thoughout their lives causing severe damage to their whole body and brain. For example, many health experts have observed that kids eating mostly healthy food like in Japan performs much better in their schools and universities, fall lesser sick, live a longer life span, are much more active, and become more successful due to their mental nourishment via healthy food against their counterparts survived over Junk food often are found to be lethargic due to overweight,observe lack of concerntration , pleothera of diseases and much shorter life span.
To conclude, Though there are many causes as above for the severe obesity persisting in society but mindful thinking about healthier food choices can certainly help to a greater extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19344262295 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61655278119 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649180327869 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.049248031 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.4 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123328926918 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502589024068 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0220448726987 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768145133316 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148202920271 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.