You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In this new era, it is evident that the advertisements industry business has flourished like never before. Almost every newly launched product is promoted by the means of ads, however, some consider that it provokes unnecessary shopping whilst for others it is informative. I agree with the former notion to a greater extent.
The first and foremost reason for disagreement with the ad agency is that it advertises the product in a way that one can have a flip change in life after having the product; quite far from the reality. For instance, perfumes/deodorants are always advertised in adultery way and provoke youth for unnecessary purchase of same. As this is their growing stage it will divert their minds from the career goals and inculcate them towards the other path of expenditure.
Another reason for the dissenting is that the advertisements are designed no doubt on the real-life problems but their solutions through that product are not related to reality and shoppers/buyers feel betrayed after the purchase as they only rely on the review of the advertisement. It is better to exemplify with the ad campaign promoted by cosmetics which promises overnight beauties and many spend hard-earned money in this belief.
It is better to say some product launched advertisements are good too. As they clearly explain the product working so that after purchase one can easily access the product like in the case of machinery demo ads are always informative in nature and helps the beginners to get familiarity with the device.
To conclude, there is no shadow of a doubt that by making non-relateable ads, agencies are only taking care of their profits and insisting shoppers spend money unnecessary. However, some ad-companies do realize their duties so launch demo kind of ads for the customer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'advertisements'' or 'advertisement's'?
Suggestion: advertisements'; advertisement's
...In this new era, it is evident that the advertisements industry business has flourished like n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, for instance, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11447811448 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95471379992 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56228956229 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4890171528 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.583333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124478676809 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523066360913 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463243274141 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725081013802 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242447084858 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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