Your next-door neighbor1 likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
• describe the situation
• explain the problems it is causing you
• offer at least one solution
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am writing to let you know that I am facing many problems due to the music which you play laud music daily during the night. I am not the only victim other neighbors are also suffering from this laud music. I have no issues with music, even I too love listening to songs. But, we should not play songs in the night at high volume.
Generally, I spend my whole day working at the office, and after returning home in the late evening, I study at night. But, because of laud music which you play daily in the night, I am not able to study properly. Also, I am not able to complete my office work which I usually prefer to do in the night time. Moreover, I am not able to attend my phone calls due to high volume.
I would like to request to please stop listening to songs at a very high volume. You should use personal headphones to listen to music. Also, you could listen to songs at high volume in the day time, usually I am in the office at that time. Please treat this letter as a first warning, if I face this problem again in the future, then I will complain to the police about it.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21551724138 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14618817029 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525862068966 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4650518533 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8571428571 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262404675243 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936541066967 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497187098122 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141345620349 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592644083 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.0946893788 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 12.4159519038 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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