1. Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives:
automobiles
bicycles
airplanes
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today there is no shortage of debate that car is the best vehicle of all, because it contains a lot of features which facilitate our life. But, a large number of people have opposite point of view and they believe that bicycle has more advantages than car or bus. Moreover, I totally agree with this point of view and I feel this way for some reasons.
Firstly, if all people use the bicycle as a vehicle, we will save our planet. It is common knowledge that people experience a lot of environmental problems in the twenty-first century and the most dangerous one is air pollution. It is happening because there are a large quantity of cars, which emit exhaust gases. Furthermore, those gases are able to destroy ozone layer, which is an extremely vital for people`s life. But, people are able to avoid this issue, if they will use bicycle, because this sort of vehicle is environmental friendly. So, it was a first benefit of bicycle.
Secondly, people will become healthier, if they change their cars on bicycle. It goes without say that a lot of people lead a sedentary life style due to their work. In addition, this kind of life style is able to lead to serious health problems, for example, obesity or even heart attack. According to the statistic, every third person in US is suffer from those diseases. But, I strongly convinced that people`s life will be better, when they start to use bicycles, because they will do some types of physical exercise, during their way to home.
Finally, people will save a lot of money on bicycle. It is definitely true that all new cars are an extremely expensive, so not all people are able to buy it. Also, there are a large number forfeits and annual fees for car, which are also costly. So, it will be unbearable sum for some people. But if people buy bicycles, they will avoid those unexpected fees. Moreover, people reduce traffic jams, so their commute time will decrease dramatically.
By the way of conclusion, based on the argument explored above, it goes without say that bicycle is a perfect vehicle of all, which I able to make our lives healthier and better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...eatures which facilitate our life. But, a large number of people have opposite point of view and ...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
... statistic, every third person in US is suffer from those diseases. But, I strongly co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, for example, i feel, in addition, kind of, sort of, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69786096257 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56704126923 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516042780749 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9974936517 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8095238095 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0951255053131 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313875309812 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271920222517 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553338575188 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305217013861 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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