122)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

We often hear this saying from people that “People are never satisfied”, I do not disagree with this statement. On the other hand I think that those people who are satisfied are less likely to succeed in life.

Satisfaction is something which pulls us back and make us settle for less. let us take an example for this, say there is a student who has scored average marks in his exam. There are two mindset which he can has after this exam, first he will think that the score is average and he is happy with this score and second he will think that he is not satisfied with the score. If he think the first way then it is more likely that he will perform similarly in the succeeding exams.But if he thinks the second way then he is more likely to study hard for the second exam and he will try to be above average this time.

Similar is the case with the adults, if they are satisfied with what they are doing, they continue to do that and will create a comfort zone for themselves. For instance say we have an employ in XYZ company and he is happy to work for that company even if the company is paying him less, the reason is that he has created a comfort zone around him.He thinks that he is satisfied with the amount which he is getting which is holding him back to change the company.

It is quite often that we find this lack of satisfaction among adults when it comes to materialistic pleasures. Let us take an example for this, a person who has a bicycle wants a motorcycle, a person who has a motorcycle wants a car, a person with a car wants a luxurious car, a person with a luxurious car wants a helicopter, a person with helicopter wants a private jet and it goes on. This is human nature we always want things which we don’t posses.

It is true that we should not satisfy for less but at the same time we should be happy with what we have. There comes a point where this lack of satisfaction can become greed and which can results in a person who is never satisfied. We should try to do our best to fulfill our dreams but at the same time we should be practical.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, similarly, so, then, for instance, i think, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.255 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35346021849 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8221801745 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189370693118 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726403388166 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765628542079 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117462813017 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542406344192 0.0645574589148 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.67 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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