The reading passage is about the influence of American comic strip art on rest of the world.
The lecture present key points which opposes the claim in the passage. First, the claim that comic book strip are uniquely american art form is proved false by the lecturer by providing fact that the Hogan’s Alley comic itself was written by a canadian author and it is based on the immigrants.
Second point which the lecturer provides was the fact that the first super hit comic which was superman as claimed in the passage was not the first one which got huge success. He provides an example of Titin which was a popular comic strip written by a belgian author way before spiderman came out , it is popular even today.
Third point which the lecturer provides is about the american influence on japanese manga.He disagree with the claim that the manga comic was inspired by the american comics post world war II.He states that the asian art was the main motivation behind the success of japanese manga.
And then finally he states that although Disney comic was invented in America, Smurfs and Asterix were written by the European people and they had their own style of writing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'presents'.
Suggestion: presents
... art on rest of the world. The lecture present key points which opposes the claim in t...
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Line 4, column 298, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ian author way before spiderman came out , it is popular even today. Third poin...
^^
Line 6, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...he american influence on japanese manga.He disagree with the claim that the manga ...
^^
Line 6, column 94, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'disagrees'.
Suggestion: disagrees
...american influence on japanese manga.He disagree with the claim that the manga comic was...
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Line 6, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...y the american comics post world war II.He states that the asian art was the main ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80487804878 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20777745043 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541463414634 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 419.366225166 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0513011767 49.2860985944 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.714285714 110.228320801 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 21.698381199 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323519616298 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163243822811 0.0996497079465 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115887233701 0.0662205650399 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194953494702 0.162205337803 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077003580767 0.0443174109184 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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