High school education plays a salient role in students life. The education attained at the time of high school is impeccable and has a high influential value. In my opinion, students should be given choices to choose the subjects as per their preferences this would develop a good sense of attainment among students.
Firstly, high school education is an important aspect of capturing essentials of higher knowledge. If students will be given choices to pick these courses as per their linking they will be much more enthusiastic about their studies. In this condition, they will more clearly understand their interests. For example, if a student is leaning towards history than they can opt for subjects which deal with historical perspectives similarly students will not gain the sense of studying subjects which do not attract them. Also, I believe that I was given a chance to opt for courses which I correspond to I would more clearly visualize my future profession.
Additionally, their are many countries such as China, Australia which has also started incorporating this theme in higher education. And as per the survey conducted it has been identified that students in such countries are much more successful and focused.
Hence aforementioned, the foregoing discussion will propounds to the view that it is a wise idea to indulge students in picking the courses of their choices it will benefit both students and teachers as they can focus on the key areas and deliverable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, similarly, so, thus, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14403292181 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86372447728 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551440329218 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8456888623 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.636363636 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176498091184 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715946051511 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486339405538 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107952854877 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505083946072 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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