Today the world has become too busy, everyone is engrossed in their own work and their own life problems, however, it feels really great to have some free time on your daily schedule. One can spend this time doing some personal errands or doing some pending work or simply relaxing a bit. Personally, I would prefer spending my free time outdoors instead of being indoors. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, you can learn new things by meeting people when you go outside to spend your free time. When we go out, we meet different kinds of people from different region, religion, and community. I believe that we always learn something new from everyone in this world and so I love meeting new people. My personal example is a compelling example of this. About 5 years ago, I moved to a different city to pursue my graduation. when I first came to the town I was unaware of many things and traditions of the native people. But whenever I used to have a holiday, I would go out and meet new people. By doing this, I made new friends for myself and I learned a lot of new things from them. Especially one of my friend suggested me to join a coding community, which actually helped me a lot in my college.
Secondly, I believe that spending more time outside has a direct impact on the health of a person. I say this because I believe that the air present outside is purer as compared to the air inside the closed, packed rooms. I love to go to places like a hill-top or nearby a lake because the climate at these places soothes you and you can breathe better at these places. All this has a direct impact on a person's health as it helps reduce the stress. For instance, last semester i became too tensed about my studies and i stressed out. This deteriorated my health. To stop it, I decided to go to a gym in my free time, and gradually as I started going to the gym, the amount of stress that I had automatically decreased resulting in a healthier life.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that spending time outside is more beneficial as compared to spending time indoors. This is because we get to learn something new each day and as it indirectly improves our health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40096618357 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48119252916 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495169082126 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7528245431 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8181818182 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235232537494 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661635749599 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906467103941 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146419273516 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080181943332 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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