Development of the country and the enviroment protection are the major issues of any contries. I am glad to live in a peaceful palce in the world. As one of the developing countries, my country China is still on the path to a well-being nation. Thus we need to make use fo the land of the country for housing and industry. I will address my views as follows.
First of all, in order to get out of poverty, China has a long way to go. Although there are some major cities in China comparable with the major ones in the world, there are still many developing regions in China. In my hometown, it was the first time for the people use the electicty serveral years ago, let alone other modern facilities. I woule never forget the happiness on my grandma's face when the electrical light was on in her bedroom. While this joyful moment could noe be shared with my grandpa as he passed away before. This unbalanace development in China is usuall especially between the eastern and western part of China. Or in other words, there are still large amount of land could be developed in the west resgions in China. Also, the authority had already realized this problem. that's why the people in my hometwon could use the electricity and the Internet to enjoy the conviniece of modernization.
In addtion, development is a key to prosperity. Like Dubai in the desert, a city grown up form zero. There are lots of palces in China could be developed from the begining. That is to say, the development of the land can bring more and more employment to this area. People would got more money instead of planting corps. Once my hometown was famous with the apples. This delicious fruit is popular in China while there are no big roads in our city, the apples would not be carried far away. Years ago, there was an express way built near my home town, the oppurtunity for being rich is open to our nenighbors in myhometown. There are more and more people in China knew my hometown, the land for apples. Besides, more people in my hometown devoted in planting apple trees. This golden chance is so attractive that people would seize this oppurtunity as fast as they can.
Finally, the development of my country did brought about many envrionmental problems like pollutions and loss of agricutural land. But it is not the excuse that we should stop using our land to develop our country. As there are still many poor people in help for life. We should find the way getting out of poverty. Or the story of being invaded a hundred years ago would represent on the historical stage. As we know the peace and development are the common sense of human-beings, I believe the development of our country would be more benificial to our people and the land we are living.
In all, as a Chinese, I suggest we should make full use of our land to develop our country, especailly for housing and indusrty. This is the way for the country being powerfull.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ill on the path to a well-being nation. Thus we need to make use fo the land of the ...
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Line 3, column 799, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thats
...rity had already realized this problem. thats why the people in my hometwon could use...
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Line 3, column 799, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...rity had already realized this problem. thats why the people in my hometwon could use...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...e employment to this area. People would got more money instead of planting corps. O...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t more money instead of planting corps. Once my hometown was famous with the apples....
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...ally, the development of my country did brought about many envrionmental problems like ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, so, still, thus, well, while, first of all, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2406.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 526.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57414448669 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53211099977 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475285171103 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 768.6 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.227242545 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9090909091 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9393939394 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254117306874 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699619580141 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733143498491 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17645735927 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539190299543 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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