As human-beings, we always figure out the solutions for everything since we began to think millions years ago. Thus the best ideas are the ultimate solution that we chase for. While as my concern, not all the best ideas come from passionate interest in commonplace things which is true on some conditions. So as we are discussing the issue to find an ultimate conclusion, unfortunately, we have to analyze the cases in parts due to the complexity of the world. I will address my views as below.
To begin with, there are some best solutions from the common things due to the passion of people who figur them out. Actually there were many cases in scientific field. Because the sicence is required people to devote time and engergy perpertually, thus lots of theories and invetions came from the constant dections in the field. Not everyone hit by the apple could find the theory of Gravity while Newton did. As he had been always studying in Physics, thus the happy accident to him was a best way to find the great Newton theories of forces. Likewise, the doctor who wanted to hele those taminted soldiers in the WAR I, discovered the penicilin by accicent when he forgot to clean the equipments in time. While after this discovery, millions of people were free from bacteria since then on. It was the doctor's perpetual effort that made this discovery happen. So without the constant and passionate interest or devtion, the best ideas may not emerge.
While as Chinese phylosopher Laozi told us , do not be so absolute on the things you may conceive as right, the best ideas may not from the condtions I metioned above. In that the world is complicate and people always grasp some oppurtunity to take a free ride. Or in another word, people always assume that the limit of their own eyesights are the limit of the world, said by Shopenhauer. Thus we should take the complexity of the people all over the world into account.
As my concern, there are some cases that best ideas come from unusual conditions. Decades ago there was a difficult problem for NASA, they wanted to invent a pen which could be used by astronauts as long as it can without the second time to put ink in it. As it would be another burden to take ink into spaceshuttle. While for months there was still no best solution for this problem. So they unusually put an advertisement on newspapers to aks for this solution. A few weeks, they received a letter from a student in primary school. They were already amazed that a pupil could give them advice. Then it was the time for shocking them ,the little child asked them, "Have you ever tried pencil?" This was the best soluition at that time. So this case was unsual enough to shock everyone got to know the event.
In conclusion, as I contending, not all the best ideas come from common place with the passionate interest of people due to the comlexity of the world .Moreover, we should know that the world itself may be not what we inmagine
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, likewise, may, moreover, second, so, still, then, thus, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2455.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 528.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64962121212 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51565259409 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481060606061 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 772.2 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5952132289 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6785714286 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171640763416 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429879443878 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469470657206 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962776483058 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171121677139 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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