People have different reasons for playing different sports. Some people play sports because they want to be healthy, while some do sports for a living. However, people tend to have other reasons for playing dangerous sports. From my experience, there are three primary reasons why people are willing to risk their lives in dangerous activities.
First of all, people love thrilling experiences from playing extreme sports. Skydiving, for example, is a hazardous activity that can even result in death. Why do skydivers still enjoy this kind of sports although they know they can be dead? Skydiving is still a favorite sport of many people around the world because they say they experience a feeling of excitement when they jump off the plane and dive in the sky. That fascinating feeling cannot be felt in ordinary sports, such as football or basketball. Also, doing these extreme activities can help people eliminate stress from their boring working life.
In addition, people want to challenge themselves by playing dangerous sports. These high-risk activities require a lot of special skills, including physical and mental skills. For instance, a disabled man could climb to the peak of Mount Kilimanjaro, the highest mountain in Africa. He needed to believe in himself and practice for many years. Climbing this mountain is a way to prove himself that he can do anything like ordinary people. Therefore, playing dangerous sports is a way of showing real strength and skills.
Furthermore, some people do extremely risky activities for fame. In the age of the internet, people can be well-known by posting a video of themselves online. So, it is common to see people taking videos of themselves when doing dangerous things, and then posting those videos on websites like YouTube. Popular YouTubers can sometimes earn a considerable amount of money if their videos have a lot of viewers.
In conclusion, dangerous activities attract people with exciting feelings, people’s desires to challenge themselves and popularity. However, I believe people should consider other individual factors before risking their lives in those activities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34411764706 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71714249199 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5762279347 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5909090909 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260538808562 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821640817696 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674892508698 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157779201296 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623073597245 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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