Some people believe they should not give up before they get desired results. However, I disagree with the statement for several reasons. Defining the motto, “Never, never give up”, precisely is an important thing you should do. In my opinion, it means that you should give up when you have tried the best and have used all of your ability.
Initially, you should consider what can be given up and what cannot when there are other obstacles that you can face inevitably. For example, when my family was travelling in New Zealand, my grandfather really wanted to go whale seeing in Kaikoura. Unfortunately, the weather was so bad that the whale-seeing boat cannot leave its pier. After waiting for four hours doing nothing, my grandfather decided to give up this activity and continued the journey, despite the fact that it is one of his bucket-list things, because we had to go on driving and reach Christchurch before sunset. This example shows that you have to give up one thing that you want because there are some limitations which you cannot control or change. In this case, there were the weather and the limited time.
In addition, giving up something does not mean you fail. Sometimes, you have been successful, but you have not noticed your achievement yet. For instance, I attended a swimming competition when I was 13. I wanted a gold medal once in that year, so I practiced very hard. However, I got a silver medal instead. At that moment, I learned that my performance had been a lot better than before. Therefore, you may have improved yourself, someone or something around you along the path since the beginning. I would call this a success even though you cannot meet your desired goal.
Furthermore, you can have a good result although your goal is not fulfilled. Giving up your goal might give some unexpected consequences, but you can be surprisingly satisfied with those results. This may be a way that you can discover new experience and have happiness.
In conclusion, I believe you should not be stubborn for all of your goals. Some of them can be given up due to different circumstances. Therefore, the statement “never give up” should be considered and used properly. Trying your best is great, but it should be to some extent.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8766066838 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72511034024 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529562982005 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6669595618 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.88 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.56 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310392802642 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887062794277 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805797636673 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19161665562 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925453303128 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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