Nowadays, universities attach greater importance to adopting measures in order to provide students with higher quality of education. Some people claims that it is imperative to invest money in updating the facilities in school to assist students in studying. In my opinion, it is more worthwhile to spend money in hiring more famous professors.
Famous professors make it easier for students to gain solid knowledge and skill. For one thing, the famous professors usually have many years of teaching experience who know how to teach students in a systematic way, like they know where are the key points and difficult points. It is much easier for students to understand and absorb if the professors slow down or emphasize at the these points. For another, these famous professors are likely to have a lot of practical skills gained from their working experience. Learning the practical skills lay a solid foundation for students’ future career. Thus, hiring more experienced professor is beneficial for students’ study.
Famous professors can bring benefits to the reputation of the university. Clearly, famous professors are the person who have international prestige and influence in their own field. They can bring international reputation to the university who hire them. With this reputation, more students will come for its fame, bringing more funding. This money can be invested in improving students’ life and hiring more famous professors. Besides, the fame brought by the famous professors also makes it easier for the students who have graduated to hunt for good jobs. Consequently, the universities will have a good fame in alumni as well. Thus, all of these can contribute to the development of the university.
Admittedly, fancy facilities are also conducive to students’ study. However, students still need help from the experts who will teach them how to operate the facilities, like new software or technology.
Consequently, I draw the conclusion that hiring famous professors is more important due to the benefits they bring to the students and the universities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...perience who know how to teach students in a systematic way, like they know where are the key point...
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Suggestion:
...g to the students and the universities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, so, still, thus, well, while, for one thing, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41212121212 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04203184721 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506060606061 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0255961339 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176341991607 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705346167919 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873139512001 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118499946126 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796648623599 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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