advertising tell people about the country
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people think that advertising will not tell too much about the country. Those people think that advertising is just for the companies to sell their products to the customers. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that advertising tells a lot about the producing country. The basis of my opinion is economical, social and personal.
Form the economical perspective, advertising truly tells if the country is rich or poor. When we watch advertising on the television we can recognize from which country this advertising is coming from. For example, look at the advertising coming from the united states, they usually advertise about expensive cars, about the brand name of every thing like medication, luxury hotels, and expensive furniture, every thing that are expensive. That gives us a clue about the United States even if we don’t live there.
In addition, socially, advertising is very important sources of information, as that it tells us all the details about the life style of the country. For example, advertising tell us how people live, for instance, in the United States what advertising has is one common theme. All advertising in United States give the message of convenient and fast. For instance, they usually advertise about many types of restaurant where you can get the fastest service, and appliance to help preparing food faster. It is true that TV advertising can tell you more about the social life style of the people.
Personally, advertising tell me more about the medical help of the society. For example, by comparing advertising of the United States and advertising of Egypt, we can see that in the in the United States there are many advertising which ban smoking. Also there are advertising about many medications that help you stop drink and stop smoking. Advertising tells you that in the United States people want to take care of their health. On the other hand in Egypt advertising do care about health at all. For instance, I never saw any advertising about medication, furthermore, they advertise about cigarette. Truly advertising tells people about the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, for example, for instance, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7917319558 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468421052632 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0911462009 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2173913043 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5217391304 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.58067250754 0.236089414692 246% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207392782222 0.076458572812 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136396130312 0.0737576698707 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306461741827 0.150856017488 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146926219528 0.0645574589148 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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