Agree or disagree,
good sense of humor is one of the impotant human qualities
The ability of making people laugh is also known as sense of humor, very few people got this ability.
However, some people think that it inappropriate to crack jokes. But, in my opinion sense of humor is one of the important human qualities.
To begin with, sense of humor help to make new friends. Because, most of the people like to laugh and have fun, and if you have that sense of humor and ability to crack joke, people will like you and it will help you to make friends. For example, I once particepated in workshop where we have to make model of car, manegment made team of 10 student in each team. In our team every one was from different college and totally stranger, boy named Raj was became every once friend in less than hour, because he got the sense of humor that I never saw in someone else. Hence, sense of humor definetlly help you to make friends.
Secondly, sence of humor help you to make working enviroment less serious. For instance, in office or any other working place some times the enviroment is too serious, and if you have good sense of humor you can break the ice and can make some what friendly for you and others. However, you should know when and where to use that humor and with . If you used it at wrong time it could hurt others feeling. For example, if you at funeral or at hospital it not appropriate to use your humor there. So, with good humor, sense of using it is also very important.
To conclude, I agree that good sense of humor is one of the impotant human qualities. This is Because, it help you make friends, and because it make working enviroment friendly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
...model of car, manegment made team of 10 student in each team. In our team every one was...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...and totally stranger, boy named Raj was became every once friend in less than hour, be...
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Message: Did you mean 'somewhat' (=slightly)?
Suggestion: somewhat
...umor you can break the ice and can make some what friendly for you and others. However, y...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hen and where to use that humor and with . If you used it at wrong time it could h...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and where to use that humor and with . If you used it at wrong time it could hurt...
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Message: Did you mean 'appropriates'?
Suggestion: appropriates
...if you at funeral or at hospital it not appropriate to use your humor there. So, with good ...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...nt human qualities. This is Because, it help you make friends, and because it make w...
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...t help you make friends, and because it make working enviroment friendly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42617449664 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22385142283 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473154362416 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8631699238 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4375 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254473172745 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118738853259 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154440096265 0.0737576698707 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181395026435 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915351310813 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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