Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my opinion, working in team is always better than working individually. I will elaborate on this in following paragraphs.
Firstly, working in a team we can divide work to individuals depending on their experties, it will result in working effeciently and we can complete in no time. For an instance, if certain work takes 10 days to complete for a single person, then definitely it will take less time of perfomed in a group. if 10 people are assigned to that work then we can finish it in a single day. This what efficiency is.
Moreover, no single individual is perfect, and he always requires guidance and expertise in order to achieve success. For example, during my undergraduate degree we participated in a Go-Kart competition, we were team of 17 students, we divided team into groups according to expertise and interests of students. This not only helped us gain more knowledge but also taught us the importance of working as a team. This explains how working in team helps to spread knowledge and socialize us. Almost all of the industries, fields like farming, entertainment, sports work in a team. For football team to win all team must work together, if only one indiviual plays very well it will not be a success for a team.
Finally, working in a team gives us more ways for a particular work like if certain thing has to be done, working in a team will give insights on all the ways then we can choose more effective way and work accoirdingly. For example, while working in a Go-Kart team I was assigned to design steering system. For that in our meeting I asked everyone about theri thoughts on the steering system and it helped me to find out the most appropriate way.
To sum up, working as a team gives us more efficient way to work, it provides us with the necessary knowledge and expertise as well as soemtimes it solves some unsolvable problems, there fore I always choose teamwork on individual work in order to succeed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: If
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69476744186 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78828474901 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508720930233 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.56398347 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9375 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184914922783 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721725986156 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522743694114 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13214736025 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403284161136 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.