Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is critically important to justify the process of work for success. Some people feels that individual work is more helpful in compare to team work in case of finding success. In my view, team work is more effective for greater success. It is my firm believe that by the team work the succees comes more rapidly due to numbers of reasons. I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, one of the reasons for my specific though is that by doing team work a person understands deeply about the subject matter and by using these knowledge he can easily find his success. As the deep knowledge to a certain task a person finds success relatively short period of time compare to the other person who works individually. I have to admit my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my personal experience. I remember when I read in college, the teacher gave us an assignment about the social work. I started my works individually but, after one month of study and collecting data I found that I was not completed my assidgnment correctly. Because all of the data were not complied with the standard result. I was really frustraed. After that one of my freind advised me to complete the assign task with their team. At last I completed the assigned work as the requirement of our teacher. If I had not worked in the team I would have never completed the assignment timely.
Secondly, why I illustrated my specific thought is that by doing work in a team a person's managerial capability is increased dramatically. Because he have to contact with different people of the team for the proper running of the teamwork. Again he also learn how to handle any complicated situation more effeciently. As, the person have to face and solve any type of intricate situation, which never be possible when a person works individually. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this. I remember when I joined in a multinational company, I found some new project work. As, I was new in job it was very difficult for me to this project. Firstly I tried my self but I completely failed but when we started in team I completed it very successfully. but in that project work i had to faced very complicated situation and I gained different managerial power from that. If I had not stated my work in the team , I would have never completed the projected work.
In conclusion, In light of above causes ,I strongly believe that team work is better than individual worl for the success. This is because in the team work a person sunderstand the work deeply and he can acquire some important skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'these knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; these knowledges
...y about the subject matter and by using these knowledge he can easily find his success. As the ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...owledge he can easily find his success. As the deep knowledge to a certain task a ...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...a person finds success relatively short period of time compare to the other person who works i...
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Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...us an assignment about the social work. I started my works individually but, afte...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...not completed my assidgnment correctly. Because all of the data were not complied with ...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...leted my assidgnment correctly. Because all of the data were not complied with the standar...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tandard result. I was really frustraed. After that one of my freind advised me to com...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...work as the requirement of our teacher. If I had not worked in the team I would ha...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...thought is that by doing work in a team a persons managerial capability is increased dram...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...y is increased dramatically. Because he have to contact with different people of the...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
... running of the teamwork. Again he also learn how to handle any complicated situation...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... team I completed it very successfully. but in that project work i had to faced ver...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... successfully. but in that project work i had to faced very complicated situation...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... If I had not stated my work in the team , I would have never completed the projec...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... In conclusion, In light of above causes ,I strongly believe that team work is bet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69197396963 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7985305439 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468546637744 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1980434066 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1111111111 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0740740741 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18518518519 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191365432197 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591379547094 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470963620267 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137822690049 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250332930075 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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