In the past, eating avocados was not considered to be necessarily beneficial. Being unaware of their beneficial properties, people used them mostly as avocado oil for different purposes. It wasn't until recently that the advantages of consuming avocados were noticed.
First of all, avocados have vital nutrients that help in lowering blood pressure. They contain as many as 20 kinds of vitamins and minerals. To be specific, avocados are rich in phytonutrients and folic acid. These nutrients are known to be beneficial especially in lowering blood pressure.
Secondly, avocados are good for a healthy pregnancy. As mentioned above, they are known to be rich in folic acid. Folic acid does not just lower blood pressure but also reduces the risk of miscarriage and neural tube defects during pregnancy.
Lastly, eating avocados can also save a lot of money. Some vegetarians tend to eat avocados because they taste similar to meat products and seafood. In this sense, people can save money by eating the meat-flavored fruit since meat is more expensive than vegetables in general.
In reading various advantages of avocados are mentioned but, speaker is not fully agree with the advantages and he states contrary disadvantages of eating avocados as follows.
Firstly, speaker agrees that avocados help in reducing blood pressure but, he states one more interesting fact that, avocados consist some healthy fats and one avocado consists of 29 grams of fats and 300 calories. Eating as much avocados as we want can result into gaining weight which will surely increase blood pressure instead of decreasing blood pressure as reading passage tells.
Secondly, speaker strongly disagrees with the fact that avocado is beneficial during pregnancy, on the contrary he asserts that avocado should be avoided during pregnancy because not only it damages the memory glands but also it affects the baby's stomach.
Finally, talking about the expenses on avocado, speaker tells about how avocado is not cheaper compared to other fruits. Avocado is expensive as compared to pound of apple or grapes and dozen bananas. Also he mentions that, cultivating avocados require more gallons of water than any other fruits resulting in decreasing natural resources. Moreover, as reading passage suggests that it can replace meat, as it gives meatlike taste, speaker argues that, cultivating avocado is much more expensive than the meat is produced. So, concluding, speaker does not agree with the passafe as he has strong reasons to disagree as mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ams of fats and 300 calories. Eating as much avocados as we want can result into gai...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a dozen'.
Suggestion: a dozen
...ompared to pound of apple or grapes and dozen bananas. Also he mentions that, cultiva...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...d of apple or grapes and dozen bananas. Also he mentions that, cultivating avocados ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, talking about, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 230.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38260869565 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53342121693 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582608695652 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3119243475 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.555555556 110.228320801 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06452816374 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220924590283 0.272083759551 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992553799083 0.0996497079465 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565579820293 0.0662205650399 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152524792905 0.162205337803 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272162560411 0.0443174109184 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.3589403974 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.8541721854 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.7273730684 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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