Green tea has long been hailed as an excellent source of antioxidants, powerful anti-aging and immune-system boosting compounds. Many people therefore believe that the more cups they consume each day, the greater the benefits. Green tea, however, contains moderate amounts of caffeine, a stimulant that is not without side effects, including sleeplessness, irritability, and headaches. A long-term study has found that those who drink more than three cups of green tea a day are likely to have symptoms similar to those that chronic coffee drinkers, another source of caffeine, suffer. Therefore, it is important that anyone who chooses to drink green tea limit their intake to no more than two cups a day.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The following argument is flawed for numerous reasons. Primarily, the argument is based on groundless assumption that the green tea is responsible for the all negative effects speaker stated in the argument, and he generalized the effects for all people.
The agument fails to provide any justification for how those side effects of a green tea will affect the majority or people out side the study, because it is possible that volintiars involved in study are from same community, And that explaine the result of study on those people are same and negative. Had the argument shown the effects like sleeplessness, irritability and headaches, regarding to side effects of a over drinking of a green tea. Even then, the argument would have to further prove that, those side effects are as much likely affect other general people as it affected to the volunteers involved in study.
Argument also stated that, many people believe that consuming more a green tea would boost their immune systeam. But Speaker did't mentioned the numbers of people have same belif as above or how many people was part of this survey. Because the whole argument is about people tends to drink more cups of green tea and that afect their health. But, speaker assume that people drink more than two or three cups of green tea in one day.
Argument also speak about a advantages of green tea with side a effects
of it. However, speaker different people have different metabolism hence, green tea's side effect cannot be the same for each individual. Therefore, we can't say that green tea affect all people similarly, it might possible that some people won't have any of the side effects.
Because argument makes numerous assumption, it fail to make convincing case that people should not drink more than two cups of green tea.
Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 307 350
No. of Characters: 1467 1500
No. of Different Words: 141 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.186 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.779 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.383 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.615 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.352 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.447 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.685 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.188 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'effects'' or 'effect's'?
Suggestion: effects'; effect's
...tea is responsible for the all negative effects speaker stated in the argument, and he ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
... tea will affect the majority or people out side the study, because it is possible that ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...headaches, regarding to side effects of a over drinking of a green tea. Even then...
^
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: MORE_A_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a more green'?
Suggestion: a more green
...hat, many people believe that consuming more a green tea would boost their immune systeam. B...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... one day. Argument also speak about a advantages of green tea with side a eff...
^
Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a advantage' or simply 'advantages'?
Suggestion: a advantage; advantages
... one day. Argument also speak about a advantages of green tea with side a effects of it...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...out a advantages of green tea with side a effects of it. However, speaker differ...
^
Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a effect' or simply 'effects'?
Suggestion: a effect; effects
...out a advantages of green tea with side a effects of it. However, speaker different peop...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 152, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...same for each individual. Therefore, we cant say that green tea affect all people si...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple wont have any of the side effects. Because argument makes numerous assumpti...
^^^
Line 10, column 48, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fails'?
Suggestion: fails
... argument makes numerous assumption, it fail to make convincing case that people sho...
^^^^
Line 10, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...incing case that people should not drink more than two cups of green tea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 2260.96107784 67% => OK
No of words: 305.0 441.139720559 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94098360656 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4573415061 2.78398813304 88% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485245901639 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 705.55239521 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0549058444 57.8364921388 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 119.503703932 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 23.324526521 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 5.70786347227 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24606810299 0.218282227539 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118364719772 0.0743258471296 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079002644008 0.0701772020484 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147044804682 0.128457276422 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815158924189 0.0628817314937 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.3799401198 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 98.500998004 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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