Green tea has long been hailed as an excellent source of antioxidants, powerful anti-aging and immune-system boosting compounds. Many people therefore believe that the more cups they consume each day, the greater the benefits. Green tea, however, contains moderate amounts of caffeine, a stimulant that is not without side effects, including sleeplessness, irritability, and headaches. A long-term study has found that those who drink more than three cups of green tea a day are likely to have symptoms similar to those that chronic coffee drinkers, another source of caffeine, suffer. Therefore, it is important that anyone who chooses to drink green tea limit their intake to no more than two cups a day.
The prompt suggests that people who drink green tea should not consume more than two cups of green tea a day, due to the presence of Caffene in green tea regardless of other health benefits involved. This assertion made in the prompt is based in a study that points out that people who consume more than two cups of green tea suffer from symptoms like sleeplessness, irritability and headaches. Although, this maybe the case, but more evidence is required to make such a suggestion.
Firstly, data needs to be collected about the brand and ingredients/ variety of green tea people majorly consume. This data then needs to be compared with how many people among such consumers have been observing symptoms of headaches, irritability and sleeplessness. For instance, if their are 20 thousand people in a selected area of study who consume green tea on a regular bases. Among these 20 thousand people 2 thousand consume green tea from a company A whereas other 18 thousand consume green tea form company B. The survey conducted in this area shows that 18 thousand people are facing the symptoms similar to caffeine. After further reasearch, it has been found that, the company A mix ginger and other spices to their green tea that make people experience these symptoms that seem to be similar to caffeine symptoms, but are actually not. Therefore , it is important to study the ingrediants and varieties often consumed by people in any region before making any such remarks or suggestions, otherwise the sugegstion will not be completly reliable and will also hurt sales of certain green tea producing buisenesses.
Further, it needs to be research whether people who were involeved in the study mentioned in prompt were not having any other health issues. This data is important before making any suggestions over consumption of green tea because there are numerous causes of irritability, headaches and sleeplessness in the popoulation these days, For example, a person who consumes five cups of green tea every day observes frequent sleeplessness. Due to getting less sleep during the night the person suffers from headache during the day causing him to get irritated quickly. When consulting the doctor over this issue he found out the he has cronic stress due to hectic day schedule causing all the symptoms similar to high caffeine consumption. Although, the cause of sleeplessness may be caffeine present in green tea, but the possiblity of underlying health issues can not be completely denied and with the lack of evidence it makes people ignore them, making it aggreviate further.
Lastly, it is important to study what all other food and drinks are consumed by people who drink green tea. For instance, a person drinks 4 cups of green tea a day, but apart from it, he also drink three cups of coffee everyday, Now, because green tea has relatively lower amount of caffeine, the symptoms the person is facing are actually created by coffee. In such a scenario, not drinking green tea anymore may not be of any use and the person will continue facing the same issues.
In conclusion, the argument as it stands now does not hold water and more evidence ( preferably in form of systematic research study) needs to be provided in order to make any such conclusion. Without the required evidence any other cause of the above symptoms may be overlooked causing further damage to people's health.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 570 350
No. of Characters: 2771 1500
No. of Different Words: 238 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.886 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.861 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.557 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 203 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 143 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 105 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.603 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.737 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.375 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.57 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.163 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ity and sleeplessness. For instance, if their are 20 thousand people in a selected ar...
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Line 3, column 860, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ymptoms, but are actually not. Therefore , it is important to study the ingrediant...
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Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y causing him to get irritated quickly. When consulting the doctor over this issue h...
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Line 5, column 621, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'he'?
Suggestion: the; he
...the doctor over this issue he found out the he has cronic stress due to hectic day sch...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'drinks'.
Suggestion: drinks
...n tea a day, but apart from it, he also drink three cups of coffee everyday, Now, bec...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... it, he also drink three cups of coffee everyday, Now, because green tea has relatively ...
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'lowed', 'lowered'.
Suggestion: lowed; lowered
..., Now, because green tea has relatively lower amount of caffeine, the symptoms the pe...
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Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ow does not hold water and more evidence preferably in form of systematic researc...
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Line 9, column 304, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...be overlooked causing further damage to peoples health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, so, then, therefore, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 55.5748502994 139% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2834.0 2260.96107784 125% => OK
No of words: 570.0 441.139720559 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97192982456 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88617158649 4.56307096286 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65157074416 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 204.123752495 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447368421053 0.468620217663 95% => OK
syllable_count: 869.4 705.55239521 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.5839743555 57.8364921388 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.7 119.503703932 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 23.324526521 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 5.70786347227 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267987253845 0.218282227539 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102153982701 0.0743258471296 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778875905045 0.0701772020484 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170466516429 0.128457276422 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087810951043 0.0628817314937 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.3550499002 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 98.500998004 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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