Agree or Disagree you the with the Do at The following Statement?
Always Telling at The Truth IS MOST at The Relationship Important Consideration in the BETWEEN the any people.
The Use specific examples and Reasons to Support your answer.
Some people think that telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Others think that hiding some truths can be more beneficial in the relationship.
The issue is a controversial one, but in my opinion, a closer examination reveals that telling the truth is better than hiding it for several reasons. In this essay I will explain my position providing examples to support my claims.
One reason is telling the truth can create trust between people, and trust can make the relationship stronger. The more information people know about other, the more trust they have. For example, when I first attend the first year of my university, I have no friend, because I didn't trust anyone enough to tell my story to. Anyway, I learnt that I have to make friends in order to learn happily. I started to tell my story to others. Moreover, I chose telling only the true story about myself to show my sincere. Finally, I gradually connected with others and had many friends. Clearly, telling the truth creates more healthy relationship.
Another reason is that people tend to have less stress telling the truth. Having secrets to hide from other can cause the anxiety, because he or she need to be aware of others all the time. For example, last year my friend asked me to help her planning her wedding, but I was very busy with my business. At first, I didn't tell her that I couldn't help because I afraid that she might mad at me. Later, I felt worried and upset, so I told my friend the truth about my business and refused to help her. Surprisingly, my friend was happy that I tell her the truth so that she can ask others to do this job instead of me. Clearly, sincerely admit the truth to others is better than keep it and make it annoy yourself.
In summary, while there are arguments to be made for both sides, it is clear that there are greater advantages of telling the truth because of the above mentioned reasons. Certainly, the truth is the most important thing in any relationship between people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...university, I have no friend, because I didnt trust anyone enough to tell my story to...
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Line 4, column 453, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to tell'.
Suggestion: to tell
...l my story to others. Moreover, I chose telling only the true story about myself to sho...
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Line 6, column 245, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to plan' or 'plan'.
Suggestion: to plan; plan
...ast year my friend asked me to help her planning her wedding, but I was very busy with m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...very busy with my business. At first, I didnt tell her that I couldnt help because I ...
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Line 6, column 339, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ness. At first, I didnt tell her that I couldnt help because I afraid that she might ma...
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Discourse Markers used:
['anyway', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'in summary', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.192118226601 0.229887763892 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.184729064039 0.158761421928 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0738916256158 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0418719211823 0.046263068375 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.115763546798 0.0685040099705 169% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.110837438424 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0320197044335 0.0351676179071 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50851519798 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0394088669951 0.0309702414327 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0812807881773 0.0887237588012 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0172413793103 0.0209618222197 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00492610837438 0.0139019557991 35% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2048.0 2387.08602151 86% => OK
No of words: 363.0 408.028673835 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64187327824 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314049586777 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220385674931 0.251872472559 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.121212121212 0.174417080927 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0716253443526 0.112833075102 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50851519798 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495867768595 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 52.4239301322 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2857142857 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2958235461 48.84282405 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5238095238 120.699889404 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.47619047619 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 39.3242817788 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 0.978417266187 1.45489161554 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491862001043 0.300154397459 164% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117824146532 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0842269569058 0.0752933317313 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.508770382717 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167376676893 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198369093675 0.114077575197 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138956657728 0.0781384742642 178% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.304154412894 0.336927656856 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0891335050097 0.067059652881 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34694670228 0.210909579961 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654695983222 0.0618886996521 106% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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