always telling the trust is the most important consideration in any relationship between people
as people regard interaction as an essential part in social life more and more, where the relationship between people should be discovered / argue in different aspect. some people hold the view that telling the truth is not necessery in whole social community, while other people believes that falsehood in relationship between people is unacceptable. as far as i am concerned, telling truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people because, not only can honest feel a good sence and claim in every would say, but also telling trust led to dependable relation in society.
The first reason which should be stated here is that honest makes achivement of pleasent and when someone claims in every thing he can proves it without any deprecating way. For example, the contractor has been implemented a job in the field and alluded to employer. If he told trust, he could claim his work and feels cofidence. However, he use falsehood in his claim then employer could visit the field and diseppear the job not have done. Likewise, the contractor face up with notorious in his working network for his corruption and even may lose his position.
Another subtle point that deserves some words is that being honest is society give rise to trustworthy and potent relation between members of the society. There was a papular instance for this case; falsehood herder. As can seen, when wolf has been invaded to shepherd’s herd, he aknowledged that he really need help but, farmers have not attention to him because of in prior this event, herder has been played/ing a falsehood role.
In a nutshell, always telling the trust is the most important consideration in society. Which led to feel a good sense and explain any claim. Also, telling trust fall into dependable relation in society
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...for this case; falsehood herder. As can seen, when wolf has been invaded to shepherd...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, may, really, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00662251656 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71324867088 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566225165563 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3892315891 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349342012596 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117016117096 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15892241803 0.0737576698707 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222119795381 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198312723638 0.0645574589148 307% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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