Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
as people regard news and other issues related to the world such as political issue, invironmental and so on, as an esential part of their life more and more, where and how they can recieve reliable news become a controversial topic among the people. in this regard, some people hold the view that to get reliable information must rely on various sources of news, while others have oppisite view and say one news resource is better than several ones. in my view of point, the former point carrier more weight and I will try to examine below the specific reasons for this purpose.
the first reason which should be stated here is that more information sources resemble a dynamic map. How? in the world there are numerous difficulties and troublesome situations that we have to explore them and reach noticable results. as many both news readers and viewers confess, it took long time to find appropriate way realizing the events over different subject. I think various resources of news can equipe news readers and viewers with insightful view over different subjecs and rewarding experience to resolving challenges related to those subjec. when I think about invironmental issue and desert expantion over the world, for example, I think environment degrated alarmingly and desert expanded rapidly but never had realized how experts eagerly try to curb environmental degration and desert expantion untile I saw famous documentary filme about these issues.
another point that deserves some words is that discriminating choice of news are very important. our life has gone through great changes since science and technology has came to being over the world. obvuoisly, there will be more innovation, invention and researches in different feild of science and technology such as advanced telecomunication by new generation of satelite. so, as I mentioned, discriminating choices of news could enrich people's view, make them feel more informed, and fullfil their comunication with other or forien comunication.
some people may stand behind this one news resource could become effective than several ones, but I believe, at peresent the senario have changed considerabely. new ideas and concepts in world of news have become more important now even than before. as I mentioned, invention of high-tech gadgets and information system, people become more awarness about conteprory events and changes. also, innovation in information technology, man's eagerness to informed has increased remarkebly. finally, news resourses progressed with technologycal advancement.
in conclution, taking all in to account, although, there are more advantages in various news resources, we must use them not only as a map, but also improve our information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, while, for example, i think, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2331.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40835266821 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88750991576 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589327146172 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2651548483 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9444444444 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159654029985 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530703871939 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350748280969 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900466966649 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0073173257458 0.0645574589148 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.