it is better to have broad knowledge for many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subjects.
people regard knowledge and learning as an essential part of their living more and more, whether learning extent knowledge of several academic subjects or not become a hot issue in all over the world to argue. some people hold the view that have many academic knowledge in different subjects have many benefits, while some people have opposite view, they say one knowledge in one academic subjec is better. as far as I am concerned, having broad knowledge in several academic subject is better because not only have our country been evolved and need people for this regard, but also this term could become never-ending willingness to surpass themselves.
the first reason sould be stated here is that we live in centary which developed in different items like science and technology, so we should match ourselves with this movement. in simple terms, the modern world need people who have comprehensive knowleghe and experience. the communication and interchange in field of culture, business, finance and other human activities are so unprecedently frequent and vigrous, that general knowledge in specific field works defficient. as wise person said: to become wiser ( in this aspect: someone who have extant knowledge in many academic subject), you need to not only read thousands book, but also you need to travel thousands miles. hence, as is clear, having broad knowledge in several fields could become efficient.
aother subtle point which deserves some words is that human is a never-ending willingness towards many thing like worth, power ,and so forth, learing and having several knowledge also insert in this regard. moreover, broad knowledge in several academic subjecs, which resebles as a map, you will steer clear the obstacle of beginning of your long journay, but we should look at other coin side, it says, learning the concrete knowleghe in many subjects is one matter, while how to storage these knowledge is another. I think if person had hard work and great endouver could got this matter. of course, component teacher is another key to this problem, becasue s/he will equip students with insightfull view over many subjects and rewarding experience to overcoming difficulties around the subjects.
in conclusion, talking into account all these facors, I find the advantages' weight much heavier than the possible disadvantages. therefore, I strongly agree with having broad knowledge in several academic subjecs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29639175258 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65340652995 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564432989691 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3622555248 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.785714286 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391977353944 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124146191177 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982415746894 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227391261303 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874332293057 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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